Score: 8

"Jesus Christ."

submission: Awesomeraptor

date: June 12, 2008

I was chuckling through the entire thing, loved how you caught his art style nearly perfectly. But I laughed the hardest at the end when I found that it was actually voiced by EgoRaptor himself! It just goes to show how awesome a guy he is, no pun intended.

Score: 8

"Much different from your usual"

submission: The Heart and the Hand p1

date: May 8, 2008

Just because it is different, that definetly doesn't mean it's worse. This is the exact opposite. I really enjoy your other works, but this is a very good change. It has a strong sense of seriousness (of some sort) to it, with some of your classic humor baked right in. Spead some of your art style icing on top and you got this beautiful animation cake!

In fact, this reminds me much of myself with my acting. I feel almost oblivious to the world outside acting, much like the guy is oblivious to his surroundings while he's drawing.

Don't think that a cute and different piece is going to suck. You've just proved here that basically you can go to diverse lengths with you flash, and still come out triumphant. I'll be waiting to see Part 2 on the front page.

Score: 6

"It's sweet, altohugh..."

submission: A star for you

date: May 8, 2008

I fully understand this is your first flash, and I can also see you actually put some work into this before you submitted it. That is why I'm giving you the time of day.

Since this is your first flash, I can understand that sound effects may be further down the road for you. Still, you might be able to add some music to stiffle the silence, so to speak. I like your art style is not extremely simplistic, like most first-timers, and I know the further along you practice, the better it'll get.

I liked the story, it was a cute. I know it's a bad word, but nonetheless that's the only word I can come up with to describe it, other than being redundant and repeating the "sweet" from my title.

I am respecting you enough not to blam this, but I do not feel that I should protect this either, sorry to say. But should it make it through the portal, I'm happy for you, and should it not, don't fret. Newgrounds is going to be here a long time. Long enough for you to make your skills in flash good enough for our shallow, and high standards.

Score: 9

"Not a single flaw"

submission: When The World Forgets

date: September 5, 2007

Where do you find your lead singers? They are fucking pro!

Please. Don't stop making music. You have a gift, don't throw it away.

Score: 9

"Great music"

submission: BM - Hollywise

date: September 5, 2007

I love your music, this song specially. The lyrics are just... well, they connect amazingly. Each of your musicians deserve only the best. Erm, doubt you look, but d'you have myspace, or a site?